Question

15．从学校毕业，或上大学，或步入社会，毕业意味着前进、意味着选择．请以Graduation and moving on为题，写一篇120词左右的毕业感言．
要求：1、毕业前活动：照相、留言等；
     2、心情（依依不舍，又要前进）及原因等．
首句已经给出，不计入总词数．
Graduation and Moving on
Graduation is a time when we move on，from school to university，or out into the real world．
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Answer 1

分析 本文为毕业感言．
写作主题为：Graduation and moving on
写作要点为：1、毕业前活动：照相、留言等；
     2、心情（依依不舍，又要前进）及原因等．

解答 Graduation and Moving on
Graduation is a time when we move on，from school to university，or out into the real world．
Before graduating from school，We usually have a variety of activities，like taking pictures，leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our friendship，or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show respect． 
However，I have mixed emotions about moving on．I want to stay and have more fun with my friends，but I will have to move on．Graduation means taking a step forward-moving onward and upward．Thus I can learn more and will be more skilled and experienced．
Graduation is coming whether we are ready or not．Let's make efforts so that our dream will come true．

点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．