Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国网友Tom对遍布中国大街小巷的扫码支付很感兴趣，特意给你写信想了解一下。你根据以下提示给他回信：

1．中国扫码支付的现状；

2．扫码支付方法：在智能手机上打开支付宝或微信app，扫描二维码；

3．扫码支付的好处。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：扫码支付Scan to Pay；支付宝Alipay；微信WeChat；二维码QR code

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am more than pleased to have received your letter, in which you expressed great interest in the widely-used Scan to Pay, the way people pay for their purchases in China.

As everyone can see, the Scan to Pay is gaining more and more popularity among people. Because of its convenience, people, whether young or old, are paying by using their mobile phones. What they have to do is enter the app of Alipay or WeChat, and scan the QR codes. The Scan to Pay is advantageous in that it saves us the trouble of carrying cash on ourselves. Moreover, it enables us to pay whenever and wherever we like.

[am sure you will like it when you have tried it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题这是一篇应用文写作。你的美国网友对中国的扫码支付很感兴趣，想要了解，请你根据提示给他回信。书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面，不能有遗漏和省略。根据所给提示，注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词各项要点，就不难写出一篇好的文章。写作时注意选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采，同时注意时态的选择，尽量选择简洁的语言，灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。

【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。同时作者使用了一些常高级句型：第一段是一个长句子，使用了短语more than pleased，in which引导的非限制性定语从句以及省略了that的定语从句；As everyone can see,...使用了as引导的定语从句；What they have to do is enter the app of Alipay or WeChat, and scan the QR codes.使用了what引导的主语从句以及不带to的不定式作表语；The Scan to Pay is advantageous in that it saves us the trouble of carrying cash on ourselves. 使用了in that引导的状语从句；Moreover, it enables us to pay whenever and wherever we like.使用了whenever和wherever引导的让步状语从句。最后一句使用了it作形式宾语以及when引导的宾语从句。