Question

10．假定你是李华，你校成立了青年志愿者协会，你想报名参加，于是向协会提出申请，陈述你
加人这个组织的理由．文章开头已为你写好．理由包括：
1．在现代社会里帮助别人是礼貌行为，且我们处于困境时也需要他人帮助；
2．通过帮助别人，自己获得体验，增强信心；
3．志愿者活动使生活更有意义，使世界更美好．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time．
                                                    
Yours                                                                               
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We need others'help in case we get into trouble
高分句型二：
What's more，volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves，thus making our life more meaningful．
句型一  in case we get into trouble 该句是一个由in case引导的条件状语从句
句型二  ①volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves 该句主语是由动名词充当，动名词作主语，谓语应该用单数
            ②making our life more meaningful此处试用了现在分词作结果状语
此外该文章还有以下高级词汇和重要短语：first of all 首先   what's more 而且  in a word 总之

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
    I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time．My reasons are follows：
    First of all，it is good manners to help others，espaecially in modern society．We need others'help in case we get into trouble．（高分句型一）
    Second，we are able to improve ourselves by helping others because we can gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others．What's more，volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves，thus making our life more meaningful．（高分句型二）More importantly，we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering．（活动介绍）
In a word，volunteering can make a difference to our life，and i think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer．（活动意义）
                Yours
                 Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．