Question

【题目】假定你是李华，于2019年3月2日搭乘某航空公司航班（Flight HZH9211）回国。到机场后，你发现遗失了行李箱。现你用英语给航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。

要点包括：

1. 陈述写信原因；

2. 描述行李箱；

3. 期待回复并表示感谢。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam，

My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger

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Regards,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger on Flight HZH9211 of your airline, returning from abroad on March 2nd, 2019. Unfortunately, I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport. I am therefore writing to asking for your help in finding my suitcase.

The suitcase is a yellow one, 80cm long, 40cm wide and 25cm thick, with my name tag on the bank. It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials. There are also some presents that I bought for my family members and friends. It will be a great disappointment to me if I can’t find it.

I would appreciate it if you could help find my lost suitcase. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给某航空公司，告知航空公司你在机场遗失了行李箱，请航空公司帮你找回。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 陈述写信原因；

2. 描述行李箱；

3. 期待回复并表示感谢。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

get lost；ask for sb.’s help；personal files；scientific materials；buy sth. for sb.；hear from sb.

第三步：连词成句

1. I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport.

2. I am therefore writing to asking for your help in finding my suitcase.

3. It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials.

4. There are also some presents that I bought for my family members and friends.

5. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择：either…or…，or

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改