分析 本文主要讲述作者作为高三学生,与母亲争论放学后是否可看电视.最后,作者与母亲达成协议:只能在周末才能看电视,限于新闻,娱乐、体育和科学节目.
解答 I am a Senior 3student.I often quarrel with my mother over if I can watch TV after school.My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3,heavily burden with their studies,are so busy to spare any time to watch TV.It seemed to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not∧able to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks that it is bad for her eyes to watch TV too often.But I really can't accpt her ideas.I think it is relaxed to watch TV before a day's hard work.Not only can it set my mind at rest,but it can broaden my horizons.In addition,and we can be kept well informed of what's happening at home and abroad and keep up with the times.
Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends,and the content is limited to news and program of entertainment,sports or science.
详解:
1.if改为whether 考查连词.介词over后接宾语从句时连词用whether,不用if.
2.burden改为burdened 考查过去分词.students与burden之间是动宾关系,用过去分词短语作状语.
3.so改为too 考查固定搭配.too…to…句型为"too+形容词或副词+to do…"译为"太…而不能…",它在形式上是肯定的,但在意义上是否定的.
4.seemed改为seems 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态,且主语it是单数三人称,谓语动词也应用单数三人称形式seems.
5.加be 考查句子结构.分析句子结构,句中缺少谓语动词,be able to意为"会; 能",是固定搭配.
6.her改为my 考查代词.根据句意:她也认为时常看电视对我的眼睛有害.用代词my.
7.relaxed改为relaxing 考查现在分词.现在分词作表语主要表示主语的性质和特征.
8.before改为after 考查介词.根据句意:我认为一天的努力学习后看电视放松一下.用介词after.
9.去掉and 考查连词.In addition表示了语气上的连接,不需要连词and,要去掉.
10.program改为programs 考查名词复数.program是可数名词,娱乐节目不止一项,要用复数形式.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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