Question

19．请你给外教Jeff写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．告诉他你在学校演讲比赛中获得了第一名；
2．感谢他在口语及演讲技巧上给予的帮助．
注意：1．词数不少于50．
      2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
      3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jeff，
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Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I can't wait to tell you that I took first place in the Speech Contest．我等不及要告诉你我在演讲比赛中获得了第一名的成绩．
高分句型二：
I know that without your help，I could have gone nowhere．我知道要不是你的帮忙，我可能什么成绩都没有．
句型一 I can't wait to tell you that I took first place…该句中that后面跟了一个宾语从句，动词tell是一个可以接双宾语的词，tell sb sth 此处 that I took first place 是直接宾语，that在句中不作句子成分
句型二…without your help，I could have gone nowhere..此处是一个由介词without引起的特殊虚拟语气，主句应使用could\should\might have done sth

解答 One possible version：
Dear Jeff，
    I can't wait to tell you that I took first place in the Speech Contest．（高分句型一）（说明原因）I know that without your help，I could have gone nowhere．（高分句型二）Thank you so much for helping me with my pronunciation and offering me the advice on how to make the speech impressive．With your great help，I faced the challenge confidently．I really appreciate what you've done for me．Thank you very much!（表示感谢）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 本书面表达为一封电子邮件，该类作文在写作时应注意用简洁明了的话讲所需内容阐述清楚，切忌用词啰嗦累赘．