Question

6．假如你是李华，某中学高一学生，面对目前的学习压力，想和父母说说知心话，请你用英语在你的博客上用书信的形式表达出来．要点如下：
1．感恩
2．期望：（1）．多交流，使自己保持良好心态 （2）．创造条件，给自己提供适时帮助
3．打算：考生自拟（至少写两点）
注意：
1．短文需包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥
2.100 字左右，开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数．
Dear Mom and Dad，
The mid-term examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．
                                                                
I'm quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life．
Yours ever．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇以书信的形式，表达高一学生，面对目前的学习压力，想和父母说的知心话．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明主题；二表示感恩，期望得到帮助；三自己的打算．
高分句型：
1．It will be a few months before I take the mid-term exam，which makes me under great pressure．句子里It will be a few months和 before引导的状语从句，表示"过不了几个月就…"；which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句．
过不了几个月我就要期中考试了，这让我压力很大．
2．It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit．句子里It做形式主语，代指主语从句that I do some physical training once in a while；so that 引导目的状语从句，表示"为了"．
为了保持健康，我有必要时常做身体锻炼．

解答 Dear Mom and Dad，
      The mid-term examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．（点明主题）
Through those years of my growing up，I always feel grateful to you for your unselfish help，care and love for me．Thanks to your constant encouragement，I have been making progress in my studies．It will be a few months before I take the mid-term exam，which makes me under great pressure．【高分句型一】I need frequent support．As you know，good studying conditions and timely help will do me a lot of good．（表示感恩，期望得到帮助）
Mom and Dad，my dream is the very one you always have．I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing．I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects．It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit【高分句型二】．If possible，as a family member，I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit．（自己的打算）
I'm quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life．

点评 考查提纲类作文．写作的步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．