Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你们班就“高一新生是否有必要进行为期一周的军训”进行讨论。请你给你校英文报的编辑写一封电子邮件，反映你们的讨论情况。
1）支持者85％，理由…….
2）反对者15％ 理由…….
3）你的看法…….
注意：1）参考词汇 military training军训
2）词数100左右;
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one-week military training.
……

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I'm writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one-week military training. Different students hold different attitudes to it/Students' views on it vary from person to person.

Some hold that it is necessary. On one hand, it can improve student's teamwork spirit , which will play an important part in their life and study. On the other hand, there is no doubt that they become stronger physically and mentally through the training.

However, the others have opposite views. They think it is a waste of time. Besides, students get burnt easily without any protection in the sun.

As far as I'm concerned, though we may feel tired during the training , it goes without saying that the one-week military training is meaningful.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】本文是一封英文信件，属于开放性作文，同时也是正反观点议论文。要求考生以李华的身份向校英文报的编辑写一封电子邮件，反映关于“高一新生是否有必要进行为期一周的军训”的讨论结果。写作要点包括：1.支持者85％，理由：增强体质，提高精气神；2.反对者15％ 理由：浪费时间，学生容易受伤。3.你的看法：军训是必要的，因为对我们的意志品质有很好的促进作用。考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成文，也要注意运用适当的高级句型如定语从句，强调句等让文章不显得那么平淡，而有文采。