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2．假设你是李华，明年即将进入大学学习，但是不知怎样适应大学的生活．请你就以下大学新生常遇到的情况给北京大学校长写一封信，寻求建议．
（1）要点：在生活中不会照料自己；感到孤独、经常想家；钱物容易丢失；食物、气候不适应；校外租房现象．
（2）注意：词数不少于100，可适当增加细节．

Answer 1

分析 考查书信类作文的写法，书信类作文要注意格式，包括称呼，正文，祝贺语，署名等，一般情况格式都会写好，考生写好正文就行，正文部分要根据所给的要点，表达清楚，不能遗漏，这篇书信的要点是大学新生常遇到的情况，要求给北京大学校长写一封信，寻求建议，一共给了5个要点，可适当使用高级句型和高级词汇，如范文里的句子They can't take care of themselves in their everyday life，feeling lonely and homesick．用了现在分词做伴随状语．因为要点只是个提纲，具体的内容要考生加入，使文章内容充实．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：adapt oneself to适应；at a loss茫然，不知所措；take care of 照顾；because of由于，因为；deal with处理
Next year I will go to study at university，but I don't know how to adapt myself to university life．（高分句型一）
They can't take care of themselves in their everyday life，feeling lonely and homesick．（高分句型二）
Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to suit the university life in the future？（高分句型三）

解答 Dear President，
       Next year I will go to study at university，but I don't know how to adapt myself to university life．（高分句型一）I hear many freshmen are at a loss what to do when they are at university．They can't take care of themselves in their everyday life，feeling lonely and homesick．（高分句型二）Clothes，money or mobile phones are sometimes gone．And because of different climates and food，they often feel sick．Some even rent rooms outside the campus．Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to suit the university life in the future？（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 这是封征求建议信，根据要点一一做出描述，注意遣词造句，不能受汉语影响．多使用平时学习的句子和短语会有帮助．