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17．One day，my brother and I were alone in our apartment．The reason was that my parents had both gone for a ball party and had left me in charge of everything．I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching television．Suddenly，the doorbell rang．Ding-Dong!Ding-Dong!My younger brother had rushed to the door before I decided to answer the door．We both thought that our parents had come home．As a result，he unlocked the door and opened it．
Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots．He looked no different from other people and he said that he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home so he could talk with them．
Without any thinking，my brother said，"No．"He asked if we would like to buy some comic books，which he was selling．I quickly explained to him that we were not supposed to buy anything without our parents'permission．However，it seemed that he was not willing to follow my advice and he had an intention to enter our house．
Then I realized something terrible would happen．As I was about to close the door，he forced his way into our house．He took out a knife and forced me to tie up my brother's hands with some rope which he took out from his pocket．I tied up his hands but I tied in a special way so my brother could untie himself as we often did．The man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen．
Soon he went upstairs to search the bedroom for something valuable．I managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on his hands．He then untied me．I rushed to the telephone to call the police，but the line was dead．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Paragraph 1：
The doors were all locked from the outside and what's worse，I did not have the keys．But luckily…
Paragraph 2：
Just at the same time our parents came back home．The police asked…
I learned a lesson on safety and responsibility．

Answer 1

分析 文是读写任务型写作，在总结材料提供的信息的基础上完成写作，写作时注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称．
重点词汇：what's worse（更糟糕的是）；forget to do（忘记做某事）；arrive at （到达）；as a result（结果）；at the same time （同时）；police station（警察局）； pretend to （假装做某事）
高分句型：1．Both my brother and I ①managed to get out of the house through the window and we ②ran to the nearby police station and asked them for help．
                 ①managed to do设法做成某事，②ran和asked是并列成分，在句中并列作谓语．
                 2．They were thankful that we were not hurt but they scolded me for not stopping  my brother from opening the door to strangers．
                  stop sb from doing是一个固定短语，"阻止某人干某事"．

解答 The doors were all locked from the outside and what's worse，I did not have the keys．But luckily，the man forgot to lock the kitchen window．Both my brother and I managed to get out of the house through the window and we ran to the nearby police station and asked them for help（高分句型一）．The police arrived at our house as soon as quickly．And as a result，the man was caught．
Just at the same time our parents came back home．The police asked my family to go to the police station．It was at there the police told us that the man was a wanted robber pretending to sell comic books and they have been trying to catch him for a long time．The police praised my brother and me for our bravery．After we went back home，I told my parents the whole story about the robbery．They were thankful that we were not hurt but they scolded me for not stopping my brother from opening the door to strangers（高分句型二）．I learned a lesson on safety and responsibility．（154 words）

点评 读写任务写作是将阅读与写作有机结合起来，要求考生在读懂文章信息的基础上，按照要求有条理地写出所要表达的内容，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，提高文章的档次