Question

请用“中秋节的等待”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下图的内容，并就此发表你的评论

要求：1．文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；
2．词数为100左右。

Answer 1

Waiting on Mid-autumn Festival
It is a quarter past nine at night. The old couple have had the reunion dinner prepared for a long time. They are sitting at the table waiting for their son, daughter-in-law and their lovely grandchildren. The dishes are gradually colding down, but they have not come yet. The grandmother stares at the door eagerly and the grandfather is making telephone calls but can not get through.
Are they too busy to come to their parents’ home to eat a dinner on Mid-autumn Festival?
It ought to be a happy day for families to get together. But like the old couple in the picture, today many old people are ignored by their children. They also need love and care. There is nothing more important than their family’s happiness for them. So every adult should try their best to spend some time with their parents and comfort their lonely heart.

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，认真读图，可知图画反映了中秋节父母等待孩子回来吃饭的一个生活场景，写作时不要仅仅对图画进行描述，也要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点是使用了词组和句式多变： had sth done做好…，stare at 凝视，get through接通，make telephone calls 打电话，get together聚会， try their best to 尽力做…。They are sitting at the table waiting for their son, daughter-in-law and their lovely grandchildren. 这句话用了现在分词做状语， Are they too busy to come to their parents’ home to eat a dinner on Mid-autumn Festival?这句话用了too…to结构。