Question

10．加拿大高中生Tom在互联网上登出启示．希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化．假设你是李华，请在看到这则启示后，用英文给Tom 发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
1．有幸得知Tom愿望；
2．愿意成为他的朋友；
2．打算如何帮助他；
3．期待他的回复．
注意：
1．字数：120-150；
2．可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
I am Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I am glad to read your notice on the Internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture．
我很高兴在网上看到你的发帖，也得知到你想交一个中国的朋友以便更好的学习中国文化和语言．
高分句型二：
I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails．我想我可以以发邮件的方式帮你了解中国．
句型一 ①I know you want to make friends with a Chinese 该句的谓语部分使用了固定短语：make friends with sb 与某人交朋友
           ②in order to learn the Chinese…该处使用了不定式位于句尾作目的状语
句型二 ①I can help you to know about China 该句是一个宾语从句，省略了引导词that ②by sending e-mails 此处是固定用法：by doing sth 通过做某事 用作方式状语

解答 Dear Tom，
    I am Li Hua．I am glad to read your notice on the Internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture．（高分句型一）I would like to be your friend．Now I would like to introduce myself to you．I was born in Xi′an city in 1990．I am studying in Chang′an No.1High School and I am fluent in English and Chinese．（自我介绍）I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails．（高分句型二）What′s more，we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese and I will send e-mail to tell you the customs，the festivals，the food of the Chinese．If It is convenient to you，please come to China for a visit．（提出邀请）I will show you around many places of interest．I hope we can keep in touch with each other．I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文规定了考生的写作思路，考生在写作时应注意尽量的将所给要点描述清楚，再结合实际情况，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文阐述清楚．