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2．目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才艺表演．对此，中学生的看法各不相同．请根据下列提示写一篇短文，并阐述自己的观点．

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1．丰富社会经验 2．增强自信 3．全面发展	1．模仿多，创新少 2．沉迷"明星梦" 3．不利于学习

注意：1．词数100左右．（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．参考词汇：模仿imitate．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
At present an increasing number of（1）teenagers are taking part in TV talent shows，about which（2）students'opinions are divided． 目前越来越多的青少年参加电视上的才艺表演，关于这一点学生的观点不一．
（1）an increasing number of 越来越多的
（2）介词+which引导了非限制性定语从句，其中which指代整个主句，使得表达简练．
句型二：
However，other students hold the different idea that （1）the teenagers are just imitating others rather than （2）showing something original．然而，另外一些学生持不同观点，认为青少年仅仅是模仿而非创新．
（1）hold the different idea that…持不同的…的观点．其中that引导同位语从句说明idea的内容，属于高级句式．
（2）rather than而非，而不；强调结构前后的一致，用rather than来表达观点带有强烈的感情色彩，语言有气势．

解答 At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in TV talent shows，about which students'opinions are divided【高分句型一】（讨论的话题）． Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art，contributing much to their social experience and self-confidence．What's more，it's good for their overall development（赞成的观点）．
However，other students hold the different idea that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original【高分句型二】．Besides，some are such"star dream"followers that they can't put heart and soul into their study，thus affecting their study badly（反对的观点）．
In my opinion，important as study is，it's not the only thing we can do．It is preferable to explore our abilities in other areas besides study（作者的观点）．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点，根据题目的要求审要点，要点要包括文字中的要点，也要包括图片或表格中的主要信息．其次要考虑词语和句型的选用，词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．