Question

19．假如你是红星中学学生会主席李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Jack推荐一名学生助手（assistant）．请根据所给提示用英文给Jack写封推荐信．
1．欢迎Jack的到来；
2．推荐刘佳做学生助手；
3．刘佳的基本情况（18岁，高三学生，学校十佳学生）：
4．刘佳的特点与特长（活泼、乐观；电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等）．
注意：词数：100；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others．
她是一个电脑技能娴熟的聪明的女孩，并且她还有和他人很好的沟通的能力．
高分句型二：
If you have any questions about it，please contact me．
如果你有任何的疑问，请给我打电话．
句型一 who can use the computer skillfully and…该句是一个由who 引导的定语从句，who在从句中充当主语，代替前面的先行词girl
句型二 ①If you have any questions about it该句是一个由if引导的条件状语从句 ②please contact me 此为祈使句
除此以外，还有以下重要短语：communicate with    what's more    look forward to

解答 Dear Jack，
    I'm Li Ming，Chairman of the students'Union of Hongxing Middle School．It's great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term．（表达欢迎）
    I was asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia，a Senior 3 student of 18，to be your assistant．Liu Jia is a friendly，active and optimistic girl．She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others．（高分句型一）What's more，she is one of the top ten students in our school，and her spoken English is extremely excellent．I'm sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China．（介绍情况）
   If you have any questions about it，please contact me．（高分句型二）
   I'm looking forward to your coming．
  Yours，
  Li Ming

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，考生在完成该类作文的时候应注意用准确的、简明扼要的语言将题干部分规定的要点阐述清楚，且适当的使用高级词汇和句型．