Question

10．假设你是李津，你的母亲突然生病了，由于父亲在外出差，只能由你陪
母亲看病并照料母亲，不能参加明天下午关于美国文化的讲座．请写一封短信向老师请假．
内容主要包括：1．不能听讲座，向老师表示歉意；2．向老师陈述缺席的理由；=．询问老师是否有弥补的办法，提出一些想法征求老师的意见，比如…
注意：1．词数不少于100；2．开头和结尾已经写出，不计入总词数；3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Miss Clinton，
I'm very sorry that 
                      ．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封写给老师的请假信．写作时，首先要写清要点，包括：表达歉意，缺席理由，征求意见；其次，要用第一人称；最后要注意时态以将来时态和现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
on a business trip 出差
take care of 照顾
ask for several days'leave 请几天假
make up 弥补
I'm very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is about American culture．
句中that连接宾语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句．
I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．
句中if连接宾语从句，表示是否．
I will do anything I can to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible．
句中I can后省略了do，前面省略了引导词that，是一个定语从句；to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible作目的状语．

解答 Dear Miss Clinton，
I'm very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is about American culture．（高分句型一）（表示歉意）
My mother is ill，and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip．I will take care of my mother until she is better，so I have to ask for several days'leave．（说明原因）I am very interested in the topic of American culture．It is really a pity that I miss it．I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．高分句型二）If so，I can listen to it when it is convenient．（征求意见）All in all，I will do anything I can to make up my missed lecture as soon as possible．（高分句型三）
Thank you very much．
Yours，
Li Jin

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．