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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

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【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。作者的表弟因父母在事故中丧生，承担了照顾两个弟弟的任务，后来辍学打工，老板送他上了大学，最终自己打算创业。

1.考查形容词。此处person是名词，形容词修饰名词，故把success改成successful。

2.考查动词名词。the road to sth/doing sth.“通向某事或做某事的路”，此处to是介词，所以后面用动名词作介词的宾语，故把achieve改成achieving。

3.考查不定冠词。句意：他的父母在他17岁时死于一场事故。此处accident以元音音素开头，故把a改成an。

4.考查名词复数。根据前面的two可知名词用复数形式，故把brother改成brothers。

5.考查固定搭配。help sb. with sth.帮助某人某事，故把about改成with。

6.考察主动语态。句意：他的老板决定帮助他上大学。此句是主动语态，故把was去掉。

7.考查时态。句意：丹尼尔花了八年的时间，但最终他完成了。结合句意可知句子用一般过去时态，故把takes改成took。

8.考查固定结构。plan to do sth.计划做某事，故在attend前加to。

9.考查固定用法。three years later“三年后”，故把late改成later。

10.考查并列连词。句意：丹尼尔有一个梦想，他正在努力实现它。此处表示并列的递进关系，故把but改成and。