Question

18．假定你是李华，下周将有一位新外教来你班任教．你的班主任计划举办一个简短的仪式．就此请你用英语写一篇发言稿，主要内容包括：
1．打听旅途情况；
2．简介班级情况；
3．期待成为朋友．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear sir，
Welcome to our school．
It must be a very tiring journey that you have taken the plane for a long time．I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）I hope everything will be OK with you．
Now let me introduce something about our class for you．There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）We get along well with each other．However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）So I hope we can become friends soon．In that case，we can help each other in life and study．China is a beautiful country that has many places of interest to visit．I'm willing to be you tour guide in the future．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息下周将有一位新外教来你班任教．你的班主任计划举办一个简短的仪式．就此请你用英语写一篇发言稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：打听旅途情况；简介班级情况；期待成为朋友．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：for a long time好长时间；including包括，包含；get along well with与…相处的好；be poor in在…方面差；in that case假若那样的话；places of interest名胜古迹；be willing to do愿意做某事
I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）
There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）
However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear sir，
       Welcome to our school．It must be a very tiring journey that you have taken the plane for a long time．I want to know whether there is anything uncomfortable for you and how you feel now．（高分句型一）I hope everything will be OK with you．
       Now let me introduce something about our class for you．There are 52 students in the class，including 30 boys and 22 girls．（高分句型二）We get along well with each other．However，unfortunately，we are poor in English，especially in speaking and writing．（高分句型三）So I hope we can become friends soon．In that case，we can help each other in life and study．China is a beautiful country that has many places of interest to visit．I'm willing to be you tour guide in the future．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．