Question

【题目】最近，你们班就社会上劝酒的习惯做了一个讨论，请你就该讨论的结果用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，并谈谈你的看法及理由。要点如下：

60%反对者认为：1. 对青少年产生不良影响；2. 酒驾导致车祸。

40%支持者认为：1. 表明主人好客(hospitality)；2. 便于交流。

Recently, the students in my class have had a discussion about whether it is good to persuade guests to drink. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Recently, the students in my class have had a discussion about whether it is good to persuade guests to drink. Different students have different opinions.

60% of the students are against the tradition. They hold the view that drinking in front of teenagers will have a negative influence on them, some of whom may become addicted to drinking after growing up. What’s worse, drunk driving has killed more people than any other kind of accident.

However, others don’t think so. They believe people’s hospitality will be clearly shown through drinking happily with guests. In addition, drinking can be a way to create a relaxing environment for friends or relatives to communicate.

As far as I am concerned, drinking is not a good way of life. Because it often leads to overdrinking, which does great harm to people’s health. So, we’d better get rid of this bad tradition.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于运用文。要求就社会上劝酒的习惯的讨论结果写一篇短文，并谈谈看法及理由。

第一步：审题

体裁：运用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

描述讨论结果并谈谈自己的看法和理由。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

hold the view; people’s hospitality; leads to overdrinking

第三步：连词成句

1.They hold the view that drinking in front of teenagers will have a negative influence on them, some of whom may become addicted to drinking after growing up

2.They believe people’s hospitality will be clearly shown through drinking happily with guests.

3.Because it often leads to overdrinking, which does great harm to people’s health.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：描述讨论结果；阐述自己看法。

2. 表示并列补充关系：What’s worse; However; In addition; As far as I am concerned; Because; So

第五步：润色修改