Question

【题目】进入高三以来，小明的学习成绩不理想。父母为了帮助他学习，采取了陪读的方式（accompany their kid studying）。他们给自己的孩子制订了学习计划，并每天检查孩子的学习，督促他按时完成学习任务，陪孩子学习到深夜…

请以此写一篇作文，内容必须包括：

1.简要描叙上述情景。

2.就上述关于父母陪读的做法谈谈你的看法。

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Answer 1

【答案】Under the pressure of the test-oriented entrance examination of university, not only the students but also their parents are dedicated to studying. Xiao Ming, a senior three student, has underperformed for one or two months, which worried his parents. So they made a decision that they would accompany Xiao Ming studying. Their routine was to work out studying schedule, supervise and urge their senior 3 boy to complete learning tasks, and to be around him until deep night.

From my perspective, I’m not among the supporters that agree with the parents who tend to be totally involved in children’s study. Considerate as they seem, they may run counter to their desire. With parents accompanying, kids may suffer from a greater burden. Even worse, they are indifferent to such an unconditional love and feel reluctant to study in return. Thus, for parents, they should take the feeling of their child into consideration before taking any action. No matter how anxious the parents may be, they can’t be too cautious when they prepare to be a part of their kid’s study. Reversely, if their kids are desperate for the support from them, they ought to be the devoted parents rather than indifferent ones.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是开放性作文，要求就一种现象发表自己的看法。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求就父母陪读的现象发表自己的看法：进入高三以来，小明的学习成绩不理想。父母为了帮助他学习，采取了陪读的方式。他们给自己的孩子制订了学习计划，并每天检查孩子的学习，督促他按时完成学习任务，陪孩子学习到深夜。请以此写一篇作文，内容必须包括：1.简要描叙上述情景。2.就上述关于父母陪读的做法谈谈你的看法。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； accompany their kid studying（陪读），the test-oriented entrance examination（应试入学考试），underperform（表现不佳），studying schedule（学习计划）， supervise（监督），urge（敦促），considerate(考虑周到的)，devoted（献身的），cautious（谨慎的），unconditional（无条件的）及indifferent（不关心的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。