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2．你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考向你求教，请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：
结合你自身的学习经历就是否请家教表达你的观点及理由；
就复习迎考给出2条主要建议．
Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．
A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．Besides，having studied that detailed information of tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class．What's more，a tutor may make you depend fully onhim and lose your self-motivation on study，which is exactly the truth of study．Without it，you may never learn better．And that's why I say there's no need for you to invite a home tutor．
When it comes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestions．First，review the points which you're poor at．You will achieve twice the result with half the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particular exercises．Second，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all the details．
Try hard and I believe you can achieve a good score in the exam．．

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分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封电子邮件，就即将面临期末考试的高一学生Peter是否要请家教来帮他来复习迎考表达观点并提供建议．写作要点包括：1．结合自身学习经历表达观点及理由； 2．就复习迎考提出主要建议．写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．重要短语：invitesb to do （邀请某人做某事），prepare for （为…作准备），be able to do（能够做某事），be similar to （与…相似），dependon  （取决于，依赖），be of no use （没有用处），When it comes to…（当谈到，涉及到），bepoor at （在…薄弱），be accompanied with（带有，兼有），captureall the details（掌握所有细节），achievea good score（取得好成绩）．

【高分句型】
1．Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．
这里是由现在分词hearing作状语，主句为I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'，主句的主语为I与所给动词hear存在逻辑上的主动关系．

2．A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．
这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作宾语，指代前面的名词150 yuan or more per hour．

3．I find that most of the information is similar to ②that of school's，①which is even with little or no extended materials，③so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class．
①这里是由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
②这里是代词that可指代前面的名词the information，that=the+名词．
③这里是由连词so引导的句子，与前面的句子I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials构成因果关系．

解答 Hearing thatyou're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for thecoming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．【高分句型】（表达观点）
A tutor costshigh，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．【高分句型】Besides，having studied that detailed informationof tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information issimilar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extendedmaterials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with fullattention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully afterclass．【高分句型】What's more，a tutor may make you dependfully on him and lose your self-motivation on study，which isexactly the truth of study．【高分句型】Withoutit，you may never learn better．And that's why I say there's no need for you toinvite a home tutor．（理由）
  When itcomes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestions．First，review the points which you're poor at．You will achieve twice the result withhalf the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particularexercises．Second，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all thedetails．【高分句型】（建议）
    Try hard and I believe you can achieve agood score in the exam．（结尾---总结概括）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．