Question

11．请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
There is an English proverb：Honesty is the best policy．It means that honesty is the most honorable and fulfilling way to live one's life．But being honest is hard sometimes because it forces us to acknowledge our mistakes．
注意：1．无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；      2．除诗歌外，文体不限；
 3．文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；      4．词数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：The same thing may be said of a merchant who tries to get rich by deceving customers．同样的事情可以说是一个商人通过欺骗试图致富．
亮点句型二：Then the students who were caught in the act of cheating can be criticizedpublicly，punished or even expelled from the school．被抓住有作弊行为的学生，可以公开批评，处罚．本句中who were caught in the act of cheating 是一个定语从句，修饰the students．

解答 Honesty is admired in every country and every culture．So，Is it necessary to be honest all the time．
　　However，there are people who try to get benefits by dishonest means．
　　For example，some students copy the exercises done by others or cheat in examinations in order to get good marks．The same thing may be said of a merchant who tries to get rich by deceving customers．（亮点句型一）Those people may succeed for a time，but sooner or later，they will be caught．
　　How can cheating on exams be prevented？The measures may vary from case to case．But I think，the students must first be well informes of the negative effect on the learning atmosphere of the university and the students'character．Then the students who were caught in the act of cheating can be criticized publicly，punished．（亮点句型二）

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．