Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是张华， 近日写信给某英文报的编辑，反映目前人们养宠物带来的问题，希望得到媒体的关注和支持。信的内容应包括以下要点：

1.宠物过多，噪音扰民； 2. 污染环境； 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被惊吓或咬伤；4. 传播疾病。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.信的开头和署名已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.

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Yours faithfully,

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets, but they don’t care about it enough. So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it.

I consider the problems more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to us, pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s worse, it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. Worse still, pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention.

Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it.

Yours faithfully,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是张华， 近日写信给某英文报的编辑，反映目前人们养宠物带来的问题，希望得到媒体的关注和支持。信的内容应包括以下要点：1.宠物过多，噪音扰民； 2. 污染环境； 3. 不少人尤其孩子曾被惊吓或咬伤；4. 传播疾病。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右;2.信的开头和署名已为你写好，不计入总词数。

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