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3．日常生活中，每到节假日，许多学生往往结伴外出旅行，或长途或短途，乐享生活．作为同龄人，你也许有自己独到的旅游方式．试推荐一、二种出行方式并陈述其利弊．
要求：120词左右（不包括已给出部分）．
Nowadays most students enjoy holiday travelling in daily life．             ．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
What's more，riding among bicyclists is not only a sort of unusual enjoyment but also an environmentally friendly experience．
更重要的是，骑在自行车不仅是一种不寻常的享受，也是一种环保的经验．
高分句型二：
In conclusion，whichever transportation means you choose，safety comes first．
总之，无论你选择的交通工具，安全是第一位的．

解答 Nowadays most students enjoy holiday travelling in daily life． Different students choose different transportation means to get refreshed．
 As for me，I would recommend riding a bicycle．A bicycle is far cheaper than other major means of transportation．When you ride with your family or friends，you can enjoy more flexibility and freedom．What's more，riding among bicyclists is not only a sort of unusual enjoyment but also an environmentally friendly experience（高分句型一）．Of course，it takes longer time to get to places．
If you go a little farther，I would like you to choose public transportation，like taking a bus．Although less comfortable，the bus is cheaper and more convenient．Besides，you don't have to take the trouble of caring for it．The disadvantage is that it might take you a while to wait in line．
In conclusion，whichever transportation means you choose，safety comes first（高分句型二）．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．