Question

【题目】如今，外出旅游已成为时尚。下面的部分物品可能是你旅游时必备的。请你选择至少最重要的五种物品，并说出理由。字数100字左右。

Documents	ID card, passport
Clothes	sweater, coat, walking, shoes
Articles	medicine, umbrella, vacuum bottle（热水瓶）
Equipment	mobile phone, compass
Books	guidebook, map, magazine
Other things	camera, CD player, Mp3

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Answer 1

【答案】While traveling, I always take the following things with me, which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes. I think the ID card is a basic and necessary document, and it is a must for tourists wherever they go. The camera is used to take pictures or record what we have done during the trip, and it can bring us a lot of fun. The compass is very essential for us to travel in the forests. Without it, we may get lost. And then the CD player, I think, is also very important for me to kill the time when on the train or the plane. What’s more, I have to bring one or two coats when traveling to a different place. In a word, among all the above, I think the ID card is the most important.

【解析】本文为一篇说明文，注意详细描写说明对象，不要丢掉要点。

开篇点名主旨，说清楚当旅游时，你所必备的东西。例如：when I go on a trip，I need to take......with me。根据题目要求，至少要说出五样必备品。例如ID card, passport，medicine,guidebook,camera,等等

3，分别叙述为什么你所选择的东西是旅游的必备品，注意详略得当，例如：the reason why I take ID card with me is because......;I think the map is most important......;without phone ,we may lost......

文末再次强调最重要的必备品,如：就我个人而言，手机是最重要的personally，the mobile phone is the most important thing to take with when travel。

【范文亮点】

1.while引导的时间状语从句：While traveling, I always take the following things with me,

2.非限定性定语从句：which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes. 高级句式，增强文章逻辑性。

3.连接词的使用：What’s more；In a word, among all the above,使文章结构更清晰有条理。