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3．假定你是李华，美国交换生Peter曾在你校留学，你校校长想邀请他父亲Smith作为嘉宾，参加新学期开学典礼，请你代他写一封邀请信，说明有关事项（活动内容、时间、地点、意义等），通过电子邮件发给他．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 a．m．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）And you'll be the only foreign guest to be invited to the great event．We'd like you to give us a speech about how Peter studied as an exchange student in our school．Some graduates will return to school and tell their stories in high school．This will encourage new students to love the school and live a happy life here．I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）
Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance？
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，美国交换生Peter曾在你校留学，你校校长想邀请他父亲Smith作为嘉宾，参加新学期开学典礼，请你代他写一封邀请信，通过电子邮件发给他．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：说明有关事项（活动内容、时间、地点、意义等）    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：on behalf of 代表；the opening ceremony of 开幕式；live a happy life过一个幸福的生活；in advance提前
 I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 a．m．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）
I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
       I'm pleased to invite you on behalf of our school headmaster to the opening ceremony of the new term at 8 am．Sept.10，in our school meeting hall．（高分句型一）And you'll be the only foreign guest to be invited to the great event．We'd like you to give us a speech about how Peter studied as an exchange student in our school．Some graduates will return to school and tell their stories in high school．This will encourage new students to love the school and live a happy life here．I believe it's a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between school and parents．（高分句型二）
      Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance？
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．