Question

众所周知，长城是世界奇观之一，每年吸引了海内外数以百万计的游客，但是很多人在游览长城时却不能保护好环境，请对此问题，向游客发出“拒绝旅游垃圾”的倡议，并写成120字左右的倡议信。

Answer 1

Dear tourists,
It’s known to us all that the Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders in the world and attracts millions of people home and abroad. However, some tourists don’t care about the environment during their visit to the Great Wall. Some of them throw waste here and there and some even carve in the bricks. These make the Great Wall dirty and less attractive.
Therefore, I sincerely hope that all the tourists protect the scenic spot. And whenever we find tourists who have some bad behavior on the Great Wall, we should stop them and tell them not to do that any more. Only by doing this can we provide clean surroundings for other tourists.

试题分析：这是提纲类短文，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候也不能逐字逐句的翻译，要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，形成一个整体。选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。如：It’s known to us all that the Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders in the world and attracts millions of people home and abroad. 和倒装句：Only by doing this can we provide clean surroundings for other tourists.
点评：提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。但是一定要地道的英语表达法，在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。不要过分堆砌。