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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Linda,

How is everything going with you? I’ve returned back to Shanghai tiredly but happy. I can’t thank you enough for all the kindness you offered during my stay in New Zealand.

When I first go there, I found hard to use English properly. It was you who always help me with patient. Now I have made such great progress that I can speak English more fluently. I even have a large vocabulary than before. I am not scared of English any more.

When I was homesick, you kept me company, chatting, playing games or showed me around the scenic spots. You made me felt as if I was one of your family members. There are so much wonderful memories fresh in my mind.

In addition, please remember me to your parents.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Yu Lei

Answer 1

【答案】1.去掉return 后的back

2. tiredly→ tired

3. found 后加it

4.help →helped

5. patient→ patience

6.large →larger

7.showed→showing

8. felt →feel

9. as if 后的was改成were

10. much改成many

【解析】小题1考查介词。句意：我回到上海。此处用return表示返回。去掉return 后的back。

小题2考查形容词。句意：我回到上海，很累但也很快乐。此处应是形容词做主语的补语。故tiredly→ tired。

小题3考查代词。句意：我刚到新西兰时，发现恰当讲英语很难。find it hard（for sb.） to do sth.，此处it是形式宾语，后面的不定式短语是真正的宾语。故found 后加it。

小题4考查谓语动词时态。句意：是你耐心的帮助我。与全文时态呼应，故此处应用一般过去时。故help →helped。

小题5考查名词。句意：耐心地给于我帮助。介词后面用名词。故patient→ patience。

小题6考查形容词比较级。句意：我的词汇量比以前更大了。下文有than before，此处应该用比较级。故large →larger。

小题7考察非谓语动词。句意：当我想家时，你陪着我聊天、玩游戏、带着我游览景点。文中chatting，playing games or showing是并列的三个现在分词短语做伴随状语。故.showed→showing。

小题8考查动词不定式。句意：你使我感觉我是你们家庭的成员。固定结构make sb. do sth.后面主动结构中，需用省略to的不定式。故felt →feel。

小题9考查虚拟语气。句意：好像我是你家庭的成员之一。as if 引导虚拟语气，be动词用were。故as if 后的was改成were。

小题10考查形容词。句意：还有很多美好回忆在我脑海中清晰浮现。memories是可数名词复数，故用many修饰。故much改成many。