Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

I grew up in my grandparents’ home. My grandfather would take all his grandkid for walks. Usually we would go to his garden, which he would pick apples that had tasted by the bird and carve off the opposite side to give to us. I once asked, “Why do you not to offer the ripe-looking apples untouched by the bird?” Feel unhappy, I thought he was such mean. Maybe he wanted to sell the “good” apples instead of feed them to his grandkids. He rolled his hand over my head gentle. “Birds only eat the sweetest apples, but I pick the best for you,” he said. “Never assume; always ask.” My grandfather teaches me a good lesson.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】grandkid→grandkids

【2】which→where/and或者which前加in

【3】tasted前加been

【4】offer之前的to去掉

【5】Feel→Feeling

【6】such→so

【7】feed→feeding

【8】gentle→gently

【9】but→so或and

【10】teaches→taught

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了作者对爷爷总是摘鸟儿吃过的苹果给他们这些孙子吃有疑问，通过询问，终于明白爷爷的心思和获得的启发。

【1】grandkid→grandkids 表示“所有他的孙子”，故孙子不只一个，此处名词用复数形式，故把grandkid改grandkids。

【2】which→where/and或者which前加in his garden是先行词，表示地点，后面的非限制性定语从句用where/in which引导；同时也可当作并列句，把which改为and。

【3】tasted前加been apples 和tasted之间是被动关系，故在tasted前加been。

【4】offer之前的to去掉 在这里offer是谓语动词，don’t +动词原形，故offer之前的to去掉。

【5】Feel→Feeling Feel unhappy, I ...，此处feel和I是主动关系，现在分词作原因状语，故把Feel改Feeling。

【6】such→so so修饰形容词或副词，such修饰名词，故把such改so。

【7】feed→feeding instead of是介词短语，后面跟名词或动名词，故把feed改feeding。

【8】gentle→gently 副词修饰动词，故把gentle改gently。

【9】but→so或and 鸟儿只吃最甜的苹果，所以我是摘了最好的给你们。根据上下文联系可知，此处是因果或递进关系，故把but改so或and。

【10】teaches→taught 句意：我的爷爷给我上了很好的一课。事情发生在过去，用一般过去时态，故把teaches改taught。

【名师点拨】

1.so和such

such 是形容词，修饰名词或名词词组，so是副词，只能修饰形容词或副

词。so 还可与表示数量的形容词many，few，much， little（少）连用，形成固定搭配。

so + adj. such + a(n) + n.

so + adj. + a(n) + n. such + n. (pl.)

so + adj. + n. (pl.) such +n. (pl.)

so + adj. + n. [不可数] such +n. [不可数]

so foolish such a fool

so nice a flower such a nice flower

so many/ few flowers such nice flowers

so much/little money. such rapid progress

so many people such a lot of people

so many 已成固定搭配，a lot of 虽相当于 many，但 a lot of 为名词性的，只能用such搭配。

so…that与such…that之间的转换既为 so与such之间的转换。

2. 以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly

immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively