Question

【题目】假定你是李华。为了培养学生意志，学校对高二学生进行一次40公里步行活动。现在正招募志愿者。请你给学校写信，申请成为一名志愿者。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I’m glad to learn that the 40 km walking program is coming and some volunteers are needed for it. I have a strong desire for becoming a volunteer.

As a sports lover, I am good at various sports, such as playing basketball and ping pong, which build my body up well. So I have enough strength to offer good service to others while in the course of walking. Moreover, it will be a good opportunity for me to communicate with other students, thus making new friends with them. I will appreciate it if I am accepted as a member of volunteering.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua.

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华。为了培养学生意志，学校对高二学生进行一次40公里步行活动。现在正招募志愿者。请你给学校写信，申请成为一名志愿者。

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