Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Bob在离高考近三个月时间发来邮件询问你的备考情况。请给他回一封邮件，要点如下：

1．取得的进步；

2．存在的问题；

3．目前的状态；

4．后阶段的打算（两点）。

注意：

1. 词数120词左右。

2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好；不计入总词数。

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to have received your E-mail and thank you for your concern about my preparations for the coming College Entrance Examination.

Sincerely

Lihua.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to have received your E-mail and thank you for your concern about my preparations for the coming College Entrance Examination. I have made great progress in all my subjects and become increasingly skillful at answering the questions. There are, however, still some problems with my studies. All my subjects, for example, are just above the average and none of them ranks top in my class. Confident but a little worried, I’m now busy with my studies from morning till night, making use of every minute to learn more. In the months ahead, I will, on the one hand, try to improve efficiency and do more exercises to have a better insight into the questions. On the other hand, I will try to keep calm and confident, making sure that I’m always at my best for every exam. I believe I will succeed in the College Entrance Examination. (127 words)

Sincerely

Lihua.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇书信类作文，给同学写一封邮件，要点如下：1．取得的进步；2．存在的问题；3．目前的状态；4．后阶段的打算（两点）。需要注意的有：1. 词数120词左右。2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好；不计入总词数。3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4. 文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。

【亮点说明】：本文用了很多句型，祈使句，举例等来说明文章需要的要点。并且写出了所有的要点，没有漏任何一个。用了适当的时态，人称用的也很何时。运用了恰当的关联词；句式和定语从句等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色，按照要求的要点一一写出了，并且简洁。长度也在要求的范围内。