Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Helen Keller who was born in America in June, 1890. Her birth brought much happiness to her parents. But when she was 19 month old, she became deaf and blind because a serious fever. Living in a world where she could see and hear nothing, she almost lost the hope to live. However, at seven, she met her teacher, calling Anne Sullivan. At first, it was hard for Anne to teach so a disabled girl. Helen’s strong will and cleverness together with Anne’s skill and patience finally helped to create a wonder. Helen learned to speak, read and even play piano. Later, she finished his college education and get a degree in English literature. Helen wrote many books, of which “The Story of My Life” was the most famous. Helen was also devoted to help other disabled people like herself. She moved both the USA or the world.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】Who ---/

【2】month---months

【3】because—because of

【4】calling---called

【5】so---such

【6】piano---the piano

【7】his---her

【8】get ---got

【9】help—helping

【10】or ---and

【解析】

试题分析：本文介绍的海伦凯勒的生平事迹和海伦的成功是因为她的聪明，努力，意志力和老师的努力。

1．【1】把Who去掉 本句是简单句，故把Who去掉。

【2】month---months 句意：19个月大。名词用复数形式，故把month---months。

【3】because—because of a serious fever.不是完整句子，故把because—because of。

【4】calling---called 过去分词作后置定语，故把calling---called。

【5】so---such girl是名词，故把so---such。so修饰形容词和副词。

【6】piano---the piano play the piano弹钢琴，故piano---the piano。

【7】his---her Helen是个女孩，故把his---her。

【8】get ---got 句意：她完成大学教育，得到英语文学学位。故把get ---got。

【9】help—helping 固定搭配：be devoted to doing sth. 献身于/专注于某事，故把help—helping。

【10】or ---and 固定搭配：both---and---两个都---，故把or ---and。

【名师点评】本文介绍的海伦凯勒的生平事迹和海伦的成功是因为她的聪明，努力，意志力和老师的努力。测试考生在阅读基础上的逻辑推理能力，要求考生根据文章所述事件的逻辑关系，对未说明的趋势或结局作出合理的推断；或根据作者所阐述的观点理论，对文章未涉及的现象、事例给以解释。考生首先要仔细阅读短文，完整了解信息，准确把握作者观点。

【知识拓展】

1.so + 形容词/副词 + that + 从句,如：This story is so interesting that I want to read it again.（这个故事如此有趣以至我想再读一次.）

2.so+形容词/副词+(a/an)+(单数)复数可数名词／+that+从句,如果句中的名词是单数可数名词,其前就要用

a或an,如果是复数可数名词或者,前面就不用,如： Those are so beautiful flowers that wants to pick them.（那些花是如此漂亮以至那个女孩想要摘下它们.）

3.such+a/an+形容词+单数可数名词+that+从句,如：It is such an interesting story that I want to read it again.（这是一个如此有趣的故事以至我想再读一次.）

温馨提示：so+表示数量的词many/much/few/little(少)+名词，此时不能用such.