Question

你的朋友王林刚转学去了一所新学校，学校的各个学生社团(associations)正在纳新。面对众多的选择，王林没了主意，写信向你求助。假如你是李越，你认为可以考虑参加篮球协会(the Basketball Association)或者英语俱乐部(the English Club)。请你用英语给王林写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两个社团，并分别说明推荐理由。

注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。

Dear Wang Lin,

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Yours sincerely

Li Yue

Answer 1

Dear Wang Lin,

In your letter, you have asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your new school. Thanks for trusting me and I’ll try to make some suggestions.

I feel that it would be wise if you could join in the Basketball Association since you love it so much. Not only can it satisfy your interest and give you relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. Besides, the English Club is also a wonderful choice. Apart from improving your English study, their activities are helpful in many aspects. For instance, your skills of communication will turn out to be better than before. By the way, maybe it is a good chance to make friends with English native speakers.

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. If you have any more problems, please contact me at any time. I’m willing to discuss with you whenever you need.

Yours sincerely,

Li Yue

【解析】

试题分析：你的朋友王林刚转学去了一所新学校，学校的各个学生社团(associations)正在纳新。面对众多的选择，王林没了主意，写信向你求助。假如你是李越，你认为可以考虑参加篮球协会(the Basketball Association)或者英语俱乐部(the English Club)。请你用英语给王林写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两个社团，并分别说明推荐理由。要把所提示的点写全，把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩，注意要求的字数在100—120词，不要太多或太少。信的开头落款已为你写好，不计入总词数。

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