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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

An opening week held in our school last week so that we could show a great achievements we made in art education.

The art works exhibition went on from Monday to Friday,exhibit the excellent art works,such as paper cuts, paintings and flower arrangements.Both of the art works were created by the students of our school.That attracted the public most was the singing and dance performances in Friday afternoon.All these activities draw the close attention of the public and the parents as well,receiving high praises from the public.

Through these activity,the public has a better understanding of our school.As a result of,we all think that the opening week was of great successful.

Answer 1

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【解析】作者对上星期自己学校举办的开放周活动进行了介绍。

考查语态。An opening week与hold之间是被动关系，用被动语态，所以held前面加was。

考查冠词。特指“我们在美术教育中取得的巨大成绩”，所以a改成the。

考查非谓语动词。The art works exhibition与exhibit之间是主动关系，用现在分词，所以exhibit改成exhibiting。

考查代词。句意：所有的这些作品都是由我们学校的学生创作的。both表示两者，all表示三者或三者以上，所以Both改成All。

考查主语从句。这里含有一个主语从句，引导词在从句中作主语，所以That改成What。

考查固定用法。表示“星期五下午”，要用on。

考查时态。发生在过去的事情，要用一般过去时。所以draw改成drew。

考查名词。句意：通过这些活动，公众对我们的学校有一个更好的了解。“这些活动”是一个复数概念，所以activity改成activities。

考查固定短语。句意：结果，我们所有人都认为这次开放周活动非常的成功。As a result是固定短语，意思是结果，所以去掉of。

考查固定短语。of great success是固定短语，意思是非常成功，所以successful改成success。