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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment when I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank.

The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I will never give up when I do anything.

【答案】1. gives→gave

2.them→it

3.after→before

4.full→fully

5.去掉when

6.such→so

7.lose→losing

8.battlefield前加a

9.time→times

10.for→to

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了爸爸给我的最好的建议。小时候爸爸建议我去参加演讲比赛,我尽了最大努力结果失败了,在我为之痛苦的时候爸爸劝慰我说,人生就是战场,要经历许多次失败后才能获得最后的胜利。听了爸爸的建议后我从没放弃过。

1. 考查时态。句意:他总是给我一些建议,但我从来没有认真对待它。文章讲述的是过去的事,从后半句中的谓语动词took可以看出,此句使用的是一般过去时。故将gives改为gave

2. 考查代词。此处指代不可数名词advice。故将them改为it

3. 考查连接词。句意:所以我报名了,在比赛前,我尽了最大的努力做好充分的准备。由后半句I did my best to be full prepared.可知,我做了很多准备,按照逻辑关系可知,准备应是发生在比赛前。故将after改为before

4. 考查副词。应该用副词修饰动词prepared。故将full改为fully

5. 考查连接词。句意:但是我一站在台上,我就紧张得大脑一片空白。the moment“一……就……”,可以引导时间状语从句,相当于when/while,表示主句和从句的动作是同时进行的。此处when多余。故去掉when

6. 考查副词。suchso都可以用来表示程度,意思是“如此;这样”,但用法却不相同。such是形容词,用来修饰名词;so是副词,用来修饰形容词或副词。此处修饰形容词nervous,应用so。故将such改为so

7. 考查非谓语动词。句意:输掉比赛的经历真的很痛苦。作介词of的宾语用动名词。故将lose改为losing

8. 考查冠词。句意:生活就像一个战场。此处泛指“一个战场”,battlefield是以辅音音素开头的词,应使用不定冠词a。故battlefield前加a

9. 考查名词复数。句意:你需要输掉很多次才能赢得最终的胜利。time表示次数时是可数名词,根据many判断,此处用复数。故time改为times

10. 考查固定短语。句意:由于他的建议,做任何事时我都不会放弃。thanks to意为“由于,幸亏”;thanks for意为“因……而感谢”,由后半句I will never give up when I do anything.可知,前半句和后半句之间是因果关系,因此应使用thanks to。故将for改为to

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