假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处
语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改1 0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Television playsimportant part in our life. It shows us information program, like the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for another things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our lives ever since.
1.加an
2.program改为programs
3.hearing改为hear
4.happened改为happen
5.teach改为teaches
6.but改为and
7.another改为other
8.late改为later
9.去掉being
10.influenced改为influencing
【解析】
1. plays important part in our life,play an important part为固定搭配,意为“扮演一个重要角色”。因此用an。
2. shows us information program like the news and sports events,“它给我们展示了信息形式像时事新闻和体育事件”。其中program包括news和sports,故用复数形式。
3. can watch films,listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events,句意为“你可以看电影,听访谈,听到来自很远的地方发生的事情”。三个动词短语前后应时态一致,故hearing应跟前面两个一致,改为hear。
4. 。第三句We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away,句意为“你可以看电影,听访谈,听到来自很远的地方发生的事情”句子的时态为一般现在时,故用动词原形,happen。
5. teach us about countries and cultures,意思是“电视告诉我们有关国家和文化的事”,主语television为单数名词,因此动词应该用第三人称的单数形式teaches。
6. teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment根据上下文,句意为“电视告诉我们有关国家和文化的事,这样我们就可以享受一种氛围”应该是一种承接关系而不是转折关系,故用and。
7. television set can be used for another things as well.句意为“一台电视也可以用来做别的事”,因此用another不正确,应该用other。
8. can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs ,意思是“你可以录制脱口秀节目和电影以便以后观看”如果用late则不合句意,应用later,同时later是副词,也修饰viewing。
9. 。考查时态;根据上下文,句中描述的动作为一般过去时,Television was being developed over 80 years ago中was being developed为过去进行时的被动结构,应去掉 being。
10.考查分词做状语;Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our lives ever since.其中influence与主语television构成主动关系; 得用现在分词表伴随,应使用主动的形式。
考点:考查短文改错
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