Question

【题目】环境一直是人们普遍关注的话题，也是每位学生喜爱和经常讨论的话题。假如你是李华，请根据下表的信息，写一篇英文短文。

环境	怎样保护、创造良好的环境
社会环境	有礼貌，乐于助人，尽力为别人着想
学校环境	尊敬师长，团结同学，积极创造有利于健康、学习的生活环境
家庭环境	体谅父母，做力所能及的事
就如何保护环境，发表自己的观点……

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

参考词汇：schoolyard校园

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Answer 1

【答案】How can we protect and create a harmonious environment?

First of all,we should use proper words,behave politely and think for others.If we want to live and study happily, we should respect teachers,unite other students,and help each other.We should also treat and understand others with more patience.Besides,we should keep schoolyard clean,which helps to make our body healthy.Finally,we need to make efforts to create a family environment full of love and warmth.Often communicating with our parents,we will help them do what we can.

In my opinion,environment protection depends on the efforts made by everyone.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇关于“环境”的英语短文。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇提纲式作文，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。How can we protect and create a harmonious environment?开头用特殊疑问句展开话题，非常巧妙；If we want to live and study happily, we should respect teachers,unite other students,and help each other.if条件句恰如其分；we should keep schoolyard clean,which helps to make our body healthy.which引导非限制性定语从句；Often communicating with our parents,we will help them do what we can.现在分词做条件状语，同时what引导宾语从句；environment protection depends on the efforts made by everyone.做后置定语，甚是经典；另外，First of all, Besides, Finally, In my opinion,的运用为文章增色添彩。