Question

14．假如一家英语报社在征集有关未来生活变化的文章，现请你以"What Will Our Life Be in the Future？"为标题用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于100，内容包括：
生活：足不出户就可购物、读书、就医等；
旅游：去月球、火星（Mars）等观光；
环境：利用太阳能，一个整洁的世界；
健康：锻炼身体，克服一切疾病．
注意：（1）标题已为你写好（不计入总词数）；
（2）为使文章连贯，可适当增减内容．
cyberspace   网络空间    太阳能  solar energy
What Will Our Life Be in the Future？
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．写作时，首先要写清要点，包括：未来的生活，旅游，环境和健康．其次，要以第一人称来表述．最后要注意时态以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
be full of 充满；Cyberspace 信息空间；see a doctor 看医生；it is easy for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说很容易；look forward to 期盼
With the rapid development of science，we are living in a world which is full of chanllengings and opportunies．
句中with短语作伴随状语；which引导定语从句修饰名词world．
What's more，it is very easy for us to go to the space，such as the moon and the Mars．
句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式．
And we will live in a tidier and greener world because the energy we use is all from the sun．
句中because连接原因状语从句．

解答 What Will Our Life Be in the Future？
      With the rapid development of science，we are living in a world which is full of chanllengings and opportunies．（高分句型一） Our world will be changed a lot in every way in the future．（表达看法）
      People'life will be quite different，and we will completely live in the cyberspace．We can do many kinds of things on line without going outside，such as shopping，reading books，even seeing a doctor in the hospital and so on．Many illnesses can be cured and many people can live longer with healthy body．Many things can be done by robots．（描述未来的生活）
       What's more，it is very easy for us to go to the space，such as the moon and the Mars．（高分句型二） And we will live in a tidier and greener world because the energy we use is all from the sun．（高分句型三）
       I am looking forward to living in such a wonderful world and our dream will come true．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．