Question

【题目】假设你是李华。最近发现不少同学课堂上打瞌睡或者自习课时趴在课桌上睡觉。请针对这种情况给校英文报社写一篇英文稿件。

内容包括：

1.分析瞌睡及自习课睡觉的原因；

2.阐述睡眠不足的危害；

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头已为你写好。

Recently I have found many of my classmates feel sleepy and tired during class.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I have found many of my classmates feel sleepy and tired during class. It’s obvious that they stay up too late studying or doing something else at night.

Lack of sleep does great harm to us students. For one thing, we can’t concentrate in class if we don’t get enough sleep. As a result, our studies will be affected. For another, it may lead to problems like obesity and heart trouble. Moreover, we may get angry and impatient easily due to lack of sleep. Therefore, getting enough sleep is extremely important.

Therefore, we should form a good sleeping habit. Go to bed early and get up early. Of course, we should also promote our efficiency to study.

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求本次作文要不少同学课堂上打瞌睡或者自习课时趴在课桌上睡觉的情况给校英文报社写一篇英文稿件。内容包括：1.分析瞌睡及自习课睡觉的原因；2.阐述睡眠不足的危害；3.你的建议。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章使用了一些过渡词语如For one thing、Moreover和Therefore等词汇。