Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的好朋友张敏来信说每次遇到重要的考试，她都会出现一些焦虑的症状，想让你给她提出一些建议并说明建议的理由。请你用英语给她写一封回信，信的内容包括以下要点：

1.考前制定好复习计划；

2.考试期间正常休息；

3.介绍有助于睡眠的两种方法；

4.希望对方考试顺利。

注意：1.不要逐字翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.字数：100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇 anxiety n. 焦虑

Dear ZhangMin,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear ZhangMin,

I’m sorry to hear that you are always anxious before important exams. But I don’t think it difficult to get out of such exam anxiety if you can take the following tips.

First of all/To begin with, it’s a good habit to study hard every day and a proper revision schedule may help a lot for the coming exam. In this way, you can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides/In addition, plenty sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well/better in the exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, it is not wise/a good idea to stay up too late. If you can not fall asleep before an exam, why not try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which may help you to have a sound sleep.

I hope you can find your best state and good luck to your coming exams.

Yours.

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：字数：100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信。分三段式，格式正确，内容齐全，布局合理，运用高级句子。I’m sorry to hear that you are always anxious before important exams.宾语从句用在句中；But I don’t think it difficult to get out of such exam anxiety if you can take the following tips.条件状语从句和宾语从句结合句中，同时it作形式宾语，动词不定式作真正的宾语；why not try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which may help you to have a sound sleep. why not结构和which引导的非限制性定语从句同句出现；另外，First of all/To begin with, In this way, Besides/In addition, Therefore,的运用为文章增色添彩。