Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三的学生李华。你班交换生Jim将要参加“学在中国”留学生汉语演讲比 赛，来信向你咨询。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 推荐一个演讲话题；

2. 说明推荐的理由；

3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数100左右（开头和结尾已写好，但不计入总词数）。

Dear Jim,

I'm glad to know that you'll take part in the “Studying in China” speech contest.

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I really hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you a great success.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I'm glad to know that you'll take part in the “ Studying in China” speech contest. I'd like to give you some suggestions.

I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you've attended The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history, Besides, since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them.

To do it well, I think you should choose impressive examples to gain the recognition of the judges, Moreover, you have to practice your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently. Speaking skills are also needed, for they can help maximize the effectiveness of your speech.

I really hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you a great success.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 推荐一个演讲话题；2. 说明推荐的理由；3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，获知交换生Jim将要参加“学在中国”留学生汉语演讲比赛，对此提出一些建议。第二段，推荐一个演讲话题，说明推荐的理由；第三段，建议他做哪些准备工作。第四段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: "Studying in China" speech contest, suggestions， recommend ,Chinese traditional culture，introduce the real treasure ，have a deep understanding of, impressive examples, gain the recognition of the judges, clearly and fluently, maximize the effectiveness of your speech。

第四步：确定较为高级的句:that引导的宾语从句和虚拟语气I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you've attended. that引导的表语从句The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history。since 引导的原因状语从句since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Besides, Moreover。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。