Question

【题目】许多学生自从进入高一以来，觉得学习压力很大，你的好朋友李丽也如此，请你以小明的身份根据下列所提供的要点给她写一封信，提一些建议。

1．将自己的问题告诉老师、同学或者父母，请求得到他们的帮助。

2．不要总想着考试成绩，要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信。

3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。

词数不少于120。

关键词汇：增加自信：increase confidence 有压力的，紧张的： stressed out

缓解压力：relief stress

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Li,

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers , classmates or your parents so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.

I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

Yours sincerely,

Xiao Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇书信类作文，主要提出的建议有：1．将自己的问题告诉老师、同学或者父母，请求得到他们的帮助。2．不要总想着考试成绩，要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信。3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。且需要注意，词数不少于120。

亮点说明：本文用了书信应该用的格式，用了一般现在时，将来时等的时态穿插。用了定语从句和一些时间词汇，条理清楚的写出了各种要点，并且自己也写出了观点