Question

   假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    When you are in public places,you will see many smokers. And most of them were young people and even middle school student. Why do so many people enjoy smoke? Someone once told me that it made him relaxing. In fact,smoking is the bad habit. It does greater harm to our health. For smokers,it is a waste of money,and cause all kinds of diseases. Besides,many fires caused by careless smokers. So never to get into the habit of smoking,but try to stop smoking if you have the habit.

Answer 1

71. . .. were young people ...                         were —?are 

72. . .. school student,                              student —? students

73. . .. enjoy smoke?                                smoke—? smoking

74. . .. made him relaxing.                             relaxing —? relaxed 

75. . .. the bad habit.                                the —? a 

76. . .. greater harm ...                               greater—? great 

77. . .. cause all kinds ...                             cause —?causes 

78. . .. many fires caused ...                            fires 后加 are 

79. So never to ...                                    去掉 to 

80. . .. but try to stop ...                              but —? and