Question

【题目】假定你是李华。过去三年一直利用业余时间打工，你想在高考后去一家国际书店(Global Books)兼职。请给书店经理Ms Jenkins写一份英文短信。

要点包括：

1. 有客户服务经验；

2. 有很强的语言、人际交流和组织技能；

3. 希望通过在Global Books的工作掌握更多技能。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已写好。

Dear Ms Jenkins，

I would like to apply for the bookshop assistant position with Global Books.

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I would love the opportunity to discuss my application with you in further detail, and look forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins，

I would like to apply for the bookshop assistant position with Global Books.

I am a high school student doing part-time work, so I have developed strong interpersonal skills as a result of over three years of experience in customer service roles. It also equips me with strong communication skills and good organizational skills. My time management skills are further evident in my ability to balance full-lime study and part-time work.

I’m always eager to seek new responsibilities and learn new skills in the workplace. I am self-motivated and enjoy taking initiative to achieve better results for the business. I also enjoy a challenge, and am keen to use my skills and experience at Global Books.

I would love the opportunity to discuss my application with you in further detail, and look forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.通篇以一般现在时态为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3.. 注意语气。既然该文是一封求职信，所以要注意语气应该比较恳切、尊重。要注意书信的格式问题，言辞要诚恳。

【范文亮点】

1.文章在构思布局上，首先以自己的优势作为切入点，开门见山，说服力强；随后又介绍了自己的个性特点，鲜明地表达了自己的观点。

2.文章的连词用得十分精彩，例如＂so I have developed strong interpersonal skills as a result of over three years of experience in customer service roles.＂，此外，还文章运用了"equip with /evident/eager"等高分词组。