Question

【题目】书面表达

高三学生面临着沉重的学习压力，很多学生利用课间十分钟的休息时间学习,实际上没有什么效果。假如你是新华中学高三年级的学生李越，就此现象给中学生英语报写封信，发表自己的看法。信的内容须包括以下要点：

1.十分钟的课间休息很有必要（说明理由）；

2.你是怎样利用这十分钟的。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.信的开头已经给出（不计入总数）。

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I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. As is known to all, senior 3 students are suffering heavy pressure of study. As a result, many students are trying to spare every minute to study, even during the ten-minute break between classes.

In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary, which makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. The ten-minute break is meant for us to relax and prepare for the next class. Only by doing so can we have more energy to study effectively in class.

My ten-minute break is always pleasing as well as relaxing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take walk outside. Therefore, I always feel energetic and listen attentively in class.

【解析】

试题分析： 本文要求是就高三的学生课间学习的现象发表个人观点。议论文一般用一般现在时；说明十分钟的课间休息很有必要，这部分应该用第三人称单数形式，而谈论个人的看法应该用第一人称，在表述时注意高级词汇和短语以及句型的运用。注意句子之间的衔接。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。文中使用了which引导的定语从句，倒装句Only by doing so can we have more energy to study effectively in class.， 还有短语as a result ，as well as以及副词Therefore的运用都是亮点。