Question

短文改错

文章共有10处错误。每句最多两处。多者从第11处起不计分。

1. 增加：缺词处加∧，并在下面写出该词。

2. 删除：多余的词用╲划掉。

3. 修改：错词下面划一横线，并在下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Li Ming is a student who have been living in Shanghai since he was born．But his grandfather lives in Taiwan, because he went to Taiwan after Shanghai was liberated．He is a merchant．For about half a century, Li Ming’s family have no idea where she lives．They miss him very much．Fortunate, a letter from his grandfather reached them this October, which said that his grandfather would be back Shanghai on December 24th．Li Ming’s parents were such excited about the news that they didn’t sleep well for several nights．So did Li Ming．The day finally came．In December 24th, the family of Li Ming are on their way to the airport．When they met at the last, they gave his grandfather a big hug, tears in their eyes．They got together．

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 第一行have改为has。

 第二行after改为before。

 第三行she改为he。

 第三行Fortunate改为Fortunately。

 第四行在back后添加to。

 第四行such改为so。

 第五行So改为Neither/Nor。

 第六行In改为On。

 第六行are改为were。

 第六行the去掉。

【解析】

试题分析：

 第一行have改为has。定语从句的谓语动词单复数与先行词保持一致。

 第二行after改为before。依据常识，理应是解放前才可能离开。

 第三行she改为he。grandfather是男性。

 第三行Fortunate改为Fortunately。此处用来修饰句子，故此使用副词，称为句子副词。

 第四行在back后添加to。be back to表“回到某地”之意。

 第四行such改为so。这里修饰形容词，需用副词，且构成so…that…这一结构。

 第五行So改为Neither/Nor。表示否定的“也一样不…”需用neither或者nor。

 第六行In改为On。表示具体的某一天需用介词on。

 第六行are改为were。本文是过去时态，需用过去时谓语动词。

 第六行the去掉。at last表“最后”，是固定短语。

考点：考查学生在上下文语境中对词汇语法的掌握情况

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。