请根据以下提示.并结合你生活中的一个事例.用英语写一篇短文．When it comes to success.much will be given to those who are hard working, little to those who are lazy．注意:①无须写标题,②除诗歌外.文体不限,③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例,④文中不得透露个人姓名和� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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8．请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文．
When it comes to success，much will be given to those who are hard working； little to those who are lazy．
注意：①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．

分析本文提示意思当成功来临时，大多属于勤奋的人，很少会给懒惰的人．即文章应该讲述勤奋对于成功的重要性．考生应注意写到生活中的事例而不是名人事例．文章应用过去时和一般现在时．写作时为了语言的连贯应该恰当使用连接词和插入语；注意高级词汇和句式的使用．
重要短语：
be　ashamed of，因什么而羞耻，honestly speaking，老实说，paid off 得到回报．
高分句子：
1．I made it a　rual to read aloud English for half an hour every morning．本句中Imade it a　rual to 为重要句式，坚持做．
2．Meanwhile，I tried to grasp what my teacher taught in class．本句中grasp后是省略了that的宾语从句，从句又含that引导的主语从句．

解答 One important lesson I've learnt from school life is that success comes from hard work．（开头点题）
When I entered the high school a year ago，I was ashamed of my English．Since my English teacher encouraged me to work harder，I've made rapid progress and gained great confidence．Honestly speaking，I made it a　rual to read aloud English for half an hour every morning．（高分句型）And on my way to school or home I kept listening to English downloaded．Also I learnt every text by heart until I could recite it．Meanwhile，I tried to grasp what my teacher taught in class．（高分句型）To my delight，my efforts paid off and I often got a high score in English．Now　I　have　become　the top student in school．（举出具体事例）
　　So I believe that success belongs to those who are hard working．In fact，learning English isn't only learning a subject but also　having　a wonderful journey of discovery （with great efforts）．（总结）

点评对于开放式作文，考生写作时，可以选取能运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型的点进行展开，在构思时对于没有把握的地方，要灵活变通或者懂得舍弃．要在掌握最好的方面写作，提高分数．

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