分析 这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语In fact事实上;bring up抚养;because of因为;get on well with与..相处好;In fact,it is not easy for parents to bring up their children这个句子运用到it做形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式;I think the big family will disappear in our country little by little,and I don't think such social situation is good enough in the modern society这个句子运用到think的宾语从句;
解答 Is it Happy to Be the Only Child in the Family?
I think in one hand,it can be good being an only child because you get your parents'undivided attention.(高分句型)They are always there to help you.In fact,it is not easy for parents to bring up their children.But if there is only one child in a family,it can be a great deal easier for them to pay for education.(高分句型)However,the only child in the family can be spoiled,because of too much carelessness from parents even grandparents.(高分句型)Sometimes he or she feels lonely without any sisters or brothers around in the family.And some of such children don't know how to get on well with others out of the family.In the future,I think the big family will disappear in our country little by little,and I don't think such social situation is good enough in the modern society.(高分句型)
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
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