Question

【题目】书面表达

本学期，你校外籍教师拟开设如下课程: 1．英语口语；2．英语写作；3．今日美国。假如你是李华，请给课程负责人Mr．Smith写一份申请书，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，内容必须包括：

1．介绍你的英语能力；2．说明你感兴趣的课程及参加意图；3．表达你希望获准的愿望。

注意： 1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, who has learnt that the foreign teachers tend to open several English courses.

First and foremost, I have learnt English for so many years that I can do well in the exams, but I am weak in speaking English, which makes me less confident. In addition, I want to share my opinions with my foreign friends fluently in the football club. That’s the reason why I have great interest in Oral English Course. Last but not the least, it is my faithful hope that I can be allowed to take part in this course, so that I can make progress in my speaking English.

I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容是写一封信给外教表示要选课。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容（1. 介绍英语学习经历和英语能力；2. 感兴趣的课程及参加意图；3. 希望获准的愿望。）进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主,第一人称。

【亮点说明】本文用First and foremost, In addition和Last but not the least使文章层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如who和 which引导的定语从句和That’s the reason why…，还有so（…）that…，主语从句以及it is my faithful hope that I can be allowed to take part in this course, 短语tend to ，make progress等。