Question

【题目】假设你是李平，你的笔友Tony最近沉迷于(be addicted to)电脑游戏而不能自拔，严重影响了学习和身心健康。请你用英语给他写一封信劝说他戒掉这一不良习惯。

要点： 1） 对学习的影响 2） 对身心健康的影响

注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯通顺。

Dear Tony,

Yours Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tony,

I am writing to give you my advice that you should give up playing computer games. Being addicted to computer games can be harmful to you in many ways. To begin with, it will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things. In addition, playing games for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of unhealthy things, which will be of great harm to your mental health.

I strongly hope that you can consider my suggestion and break away from computer games as soon as possible.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Ping

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文中的书信的写作。你的笔友Tony最近沉迷于(be addicted to)电脑游戏而不能自拔，严重影响了学习和身心健康。请你用英语给他写一封信劝说他戒掉这一不良习惯。请根据以下要点给

他回信。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布

局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时

态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准

确表述。

亮点说明：范文使用了一些常用的短语：give sb. advice给某人建议、give up放弃、be addicted to沉溺于、be harmful to对……有害；break away from脱离，打破；which引导非限制性定语从句；playing games for a long time will do harm to your health这句话用playing games for a long time动名词形式作主语；用To begin with、Worse still使文章条理清晰，更加连贯。