Question

【题目】假如你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。

文中应包括：

1. 常吃快餐的危害

2. 提出建议

参考词汇：营养nutrition

注意：

1. 词数不少于100；

2. 可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Tom，

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Best Wishes

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom，

I’m worried to know that you often eat fast food for lunch these days. I don't think it's a wise choice Though fast food is convenient and delicious in taste，even becomes more and more popular in China，I still believe it can't provide us with adequate nutrition. To teenagers，it is usually not a balanced diet and low in cleanliness To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，you'd better take some home-cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen I don’t mean fast food should be refused in your life. But just choose it when you are really in a hurry ，or it will surely take some side effects to you，

I hope you can take my advice seriously and enjoy all kinds of delicious and healthy Chinese food.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假如你是晨光中学的李津。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。文中应包括：1. 常吃快餐的危害；2. 提出建议。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Confucius Institute （孔子学院），the Chinese poetry competition（中文诗词比赛），my sincere congratulations（衷心的祝贺），further study（深造）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。